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Tania's avatar

Enjoyed the first chapter immensely, Elizabeth fascinates me.

One tiny typo; there shouldn't be an apostrophe in 1960's - just 1960s. 🙂

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Laura G's avatar

I'm probably most intrigued by Jacob - why did he strike up the conversation initially with Arthur? Is it purely coincidence they have a shared interest in defence or does he know more about Arthur than he's letting on... I sense he's the villain, Arthur is the hero but hard to tell at this stage! I wondered if Arthur would need a bit more convincing to let this guy in to the shed / secret although elizabeth's first line makes it seem otherwise! I like arthur, he seems extremely self aware.

I really enjoyed the first chapter - it got to the shed very quickly but it was the detailed descriptions of the characters (and the nice additions e.g the cat) that hooked me in...

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