The story continues
Great pace - it reads really well and I'm intrigued to find out more.
Some small errors spotted -
Writing is Editing. Bit once - should be But
In the dragons in the den - should it be to the dragons?
Notes into back into his briefcase - delete first 'into'
Still starred at him - should be staring?
He husband glared - her husband
Sorry I've done some editing before but hopefully this is feedback you want! Thought I may see you in the Oxshott gallery today to give in person!
Thanks Emma. Ooh lots of typos this week. I need to be more careful.
Storey so far is exciting, looking forward to the next chapter
Thanks Karen
Great pace - it reads really well and I'm intrigued to find out more.
Some small errors spotted -
Writing is Editing. Bit once - should be But
In the dragons in the den - should it be to the dragons?
Notes into back into his briefcase - delete first 'into'
Still starred at him - should be staring?
He husband glared - her husband
Sorry I've done some editing before but hopefully this is feedback you want! Thought I may see you in the Oxshott gallery today to give in person!
Thanks Emma. Ooh lots of typos this week. I need to be more careful.
Storey so far is exciting, looking forward to the next chapter
Thanks Karen